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Friday 23 November 2012

My Narrative On The Old Lady By Asmah

One day, in the school grounds, there was a girl with long black hair, with soft brown eyes. .Her name was Xa ( short for Alexandra) who had a best friend,, and her name was Charlie (short for Charlotte) .She had silky white blond hair with navy blue eyes. There were two other girls one with reddish hair and brown eyes. Their names where Izzie ( short for Isabella) and Hannah. The four girls were 12 years old and they did everything together.

One day they saw an old lady with white blond hair and navy blue eyes, and she was 55 years old. The girls knew her very well. She was Charlie`s gran. She never liked it when Charlie brought her friends round to her house because she didn't like children. Charlie's Mum was an taxi driver and her Dad was never around. Everyday after school Charlie would go to her gran's house. Anyway Charlie brought her friends to her gran's house, because Charlie's Mum was always out driving her taxi and Charlie's needed some company.

One day while Charlie, Xa, Izzie and Hannah were at school, Charlie's Gran was watering her garden when she suddenly realized that her glasses were missing. She hurried to the house. She looked everywhere but she could not find them. As she was doing so she accidentally banged her head on the wall and fell on the couch unconscious.

An hour later Charlie and her three friends got to Charlie's Gran`s house. Charlie was completely shocked when she saw her Gran. She was lying on couch her hair spilled behind her. She looked like real mess.

“Gran, Gran wake up Gran” Charlie said worriedly.
Charlie's Gran slowly opened her eyes, just then Xa realized that she wasn't wearing her glasses. “Hey, you guys look she isn't wearing her glasses”. “Come on lets find her glasses”. Said Izzie. “Yeah lets go” insisted Hannah. The girls searched everywhere but they could not find them. Soon they were very tired and sweaty. “We've looked everywhere”. began Xa. “We can't find them” joined Izzie and Hannah. They all sat on the sofas and huffed with exhaustion.

Then Charlie saw something shining in the corner of the wall, she stood up and walked towards the wall. there she saw them “The glasses” shrieked Charlie. “Where, where ?” shouted Xa, Izzie and Hannah altogether. “Here, come and see for yourselves. “She is right they are here” said Xa. “Lets give it back to Gran”. Said Charlie more calmly. So the girls handed charlie's Gran an ice pack and soon she woke up. “ Here is your glasses gran" said Charlie. “Thank you so much” Said charlie's Gran.                                                                                      The End       

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